April 4th – April 8th

Hi Lucia, Nozomi, Tamaki, Hang, Marco, Yosuke, Fatimah, Janete, and Ewelina!

We will work on our first papers over the next 4 days.

Here are the guidelines for the paper that you will give to me on Tuesday:

The First Submission must have these things: an intro paragraph with a strong thesis statement; topic sentences for each of your supporting points/paragraphs; at least 2 or 3 pieces of evidence for each supporting point. (Of course, I expect an additional sentence or two for each of your paragraphs) Do your best.

In addition to the work on your first paper, you can work on some grammar and writing mechanics, and you can think about the second paper that you will write during this term. Please decide whether you will find sources for a topic of your choosing, or will write your second paper based on the articles in one of the two themes that you did not use for your first paper.

I am late to upload your outlines to our website, sorry, but please help one of your groupmates by giving feedback for his or her outline. If you can do this by tomorrow evening, this person will be able to use this information to help him or her to write their paper. When giving feedback, please use the Outline Worksheet on our resources page.

Nozomi gives feedback for Lucia’s outline.
Lucia gives feedback for Nozomi’s outline.
Tamaki gives feedback for Hang’s outline.
Hang gives feedback for Tamaki’s outline.

Ewelina  gives feedback for Janete’s outline.
Janete  gives feedback for Ewelina’s outline.
Marco gives feedback for Yosuke’s outline.
Yosuke  gives feedback for Fatimah’s outline.
Fatimah  gives feedback for Marco’s outline.

You can post feedback on the Outlines pages by leaving a comment.

Everything above is due by next Tuesday. 

If you have any questions, please contact me.

Have a great weekend!

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2 Responses to April 4th – April 8th

  1. tamaki says:

    Hey Rick, I cannot find out Hang’s online from the thread of Globalization members… Could you check please?

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